Helpful McHelpfulpants

You had some nice images in this, but I wasn't really moved by it as a whole because, I think, you used some sentiments that were too familiar, too traditional. ...

You had some nice images in this, but I wasn't really moved by it as a whole because, I think, you used some sentiments that were too familiar, too traditional. ...

I recommend cutting out the two paragraphs entirely, because they're boring . Who cares what Matt thinks of Twilight or his homework or his love life? Sure, it develops his ...

when I gathered paste-glass jewels and bought songs. Here was one point where I didn't really get what you were saying. What are 'paste-glass' jewels? The image I get, if ...

And now you know who I am on livejournal, too. Well done. *bows*

Are you DISCRIMINATING against my speech - er, typing - impediment? *horrors* I have rated my very first poem. I wasn't quite sure what category to put it in; I ...

In fact what I hate most is cliched writing. Next in line are cliched characters; lastly a cliched plot.

I watched the Brady Bunch once, as a very small child. It was nothing that several dozen viewings of the Addams Family couldn't repair, psychologically. So that was good! Thank ...

In general I think the repetition of 'said' doesn't really register at all with a reader. At least it doesn't for me. But it's a good list.

It was interesting, but I didn't come away affected by the message or moved for the world being shunned, which seems rather a waste. I didn't pay much note to ...

I too thought the bird metaphor was marvelous and found everything else a bit... lacking, mostly because the reader really has no investment in the speaker; we are not anchored, ...

He Lusts For Imperfection Even Now I would have you speak of unkind truths, please: not sunshine on the window-glass and soft gloved hands to guide me thus and so, ...

No, the TRUTH of the matter is... HELPFUL MCHELPFULPANTS really quite likes you, but secretly hates your guts. Or is it the other way around? She is young and confused ...